Troubadour
The erstwhile dog-day troubadour
Beats upon his belly’s kettle drum,
His song a steady tuneless thrum -
A maddening, constant, screeching hum -
From dawn’s soft light through setting sun,
Courting death in his frantic search for amour:
This summer’s-end winged troubadour.
For three lustra and two circuits of the sun,
Our hero suckled on tree roots underground,
Until his way to the surface could be found,
Where females strained to hear his sound.
When, at last, he felt his wings unbound,
When Magicada’s imago cycle had begun,
He plumped – dried – his wings in July sun.
The assassin, too, listens for his song,
And, when it’s heard, she takes to wing;
Oblivious to her, he proceeds to sing.
He does not flinch upon her sting,
Though a squirming death it will bring.
Her egg inside him will hatch ere long,
After her venom stills his shrill song.
The valkryja glides her prize to her lair,
Where other Sæhrímnirs line the hall,
Providing grisly meat and mead for all
Her wriggling einherjar, still so small.
The troubadour’s carcass begins to fall
To dust in a chamber filled with dank air,
Inside the wasp’s subterranean lair.
The troubadour’s rêve de mort is brief,
Like his life; a fading, melancholy review
Of all the things he had hoped to do –
Songs to be sung, the pitching of ardent woo –
A simple life, really, not much for him to do.
His early demise brings Troubadour deep grief,
Abridging a life-span predestined to be brief.
Adieu, little dog-day troubadour.
You’ll beat your kettle drum no more.
© 2009 Martha McLemore
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
The Troubadour
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12 comments:
Insects are so unsettling aren't they? This is a terribly sad story!
Far Out! Did you write that? Fantastic! Poetic is the life of the insect(s). Many live less than 24 hours. Hope all is good with you.
Lucy: It is sad, yet I had to restrian from including a link to Wagner's Ride of the Valkyries because it was too comical to put together with the photo and my attempted poetry.
:)
Hello, Spadoman:
Things are better than last week around here, and will keep getting better, I believe. I hope the same for your neck of the woods, too.
Yes, I did write this. Barrett Bonden had issued a challenge (or, at least, I took a comment he made as such) on writing a poem about a cicada. It was much longer before I pared it down to this. It needs work, but I don't know what to do to fix it.
So glad you made it home safe and sound from your last ride.
:)
Amazing poem, Sofie. And an amazing photo of a cicada killer with its victim!
While I'm not one for insects, I am one for poetry. I love this! Start to finish. The macabre is the extra little pay-off. Sorry poor little Troubadour. Sucks to be you...
(thank you for your kind remarks my way. too kind, but i take them and hold them dear.)
xo
erin
I wonder if the lifetime of a may fly seems like an eternity to itself.
You seem to have stepped up your game many notches since your last attempt at verse. A far wider vocabulary, far longer poetic leaps, and a willingness to wrestle with a much more demanding rhyme structure. But much much better still, your detachment from this non-personal subject has allowed your imagination (already evident in your prose) to wander much further afield. And the foreign phrases! Congratulations Crow! - welcome incipient raptor.
I do have one serious criticism, though. All those anti-feminist hairy-chested guys - you're confirming their worst fears.
Deedee: That is a great photo, and I thought I had listed the credit, but hadn't. So, I did today.
Glad you liked the poem.
:)
WiaW: "Sucks to be you..."
I choked on spit, I laughed so hard at that line. Good one!
:)
Susan:Talk about hyper-drive! Its whole life flashes by as its happening.
Sometimes, I feel like mine is doing the same thing.
:)
Hello, BB:
Thank you for the compliment.
The first photograph I found of a cicada wasp with victim reminded me of the Valkyries spiriting fallen warriors off to Valhalla, to be nurtured back to life, though the wasp has no such resurrection in mind: hence, the related references.
As for foreign phrases, I have Google to thank for the French translation of my original phrase, which was 'dying dream.' The French sounds more romantic when said aloud, don't you think?
:)
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